My Story

Ordinary World: Kyle is popular and the star of the soccer team and his dad puts way to much pressure on him to be the best, he can hardly take it.
Call: He meets a shy pretty girl who makes him feel like his life is not falling apart, his dad will be furious if he finds out that he is getting distracted form his "future"
Refusal: He refuses to let his father run his life anymore and for the first time ever he stands up for himself
Mentor: His soccer coach notices he is not playing as well and helps to guide him through his inner turmoil, he shows Kyle that there needs to be a balance in life.
Threshold: Kyle crosses the threshold when he asks the girl to prom despite his fathers arguments and the teams jabs that she is a nobody.
Tests, Allies, and enemies: His dad and his teammates disagree and show it, he has to bear through it and decide that his feelings for this girl are stronger then that.
Approach: before the dance Kyle writes a letter to his father explaining how he loves him and hopes he will support him in his decisions, and leaves it in his office, then leaves to the dance.
Ordeal: Kyle gets in a fight at the dance with a kid that is trying to get into his number one spot on the soccer team.
Reward: The girl tells him how much she cares about him, they spend the rest of the dance in the soccer field looking at the stars, they have a magical kiss and realize that they were meant to be together! yay!
The road back: a few days later Kyle's dad talks to him and realizes that he made mistakes, their relationship becomes so much stronger.
Death: Kyles close friend contracts terminal cancer and he closes himself off again, not even the girl can get him out of his gloom.
Resurrection: His dad snaps him out of it and shows him once again that there is more to life and he needs to have balance.
Elixir: Kyle apologizes to the girl and they are sooper dooper happy, and sooper cute together.

Archetypes 
Hero: the girl is the hero she saves Kyle when no one else could
Mentor: the soccer coach is the mentor, he is the only adult influence kyle has in the beggining
threshold guardian: the dad was the guardian, he had to get past his dad to get through the threshold.